Thursday: Results

Call To Edit

We talked about redundancies within the same sentence yesterday, but I’d like to touch upon a hidden danger: redundant sentences.

Take a look at these lines:

Tech was a big man for his age and quite the gangbanger stereotype, except for his Computer Science degree. He was a gamer and computer wiz, hence the moniker.

How many of these do you have in your writing? Is there anything you find in editing that you think should be used for A Call to Edit? Post below!

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